It's really good you tried hard. ^^! That's always good! But they have really wonked out bodies, try to work with that. and like ^^ look at books to help you with propotions and such. Oh she's a priestess, a miko. I WOULD LOVE, if you turned your manga, into a manga ^^ as werid as that sounds. Do it know or wait ^0^. Wow it also seems beginners always have this problem. you forgot ears. ^^. and also when your doing hair, you also sorta make them look bald, but that is because they don't have ears. so work on that. ^0^! Keep trying, you'll get better. You should keep your ideas to yourself until you make it a manga! if you want too. Do as you wish. Don't blow anything i said out of proportion .o. that's mean. ^-^ Kokkoii-Matokus number one rule: Never Give Up! ^^!